That’s a good one. A little flawed, like for example, Satoko looks more like she’s next to Satoshi rather than behind him, which is what I assume you had in mind and Satoshi’s facial expression makes his drawing look a little… unlike him. Don’t get me wrong, the face is very well drawn, you just could work a little bit more with his expression. And his bangs on the left side, look like they have been placed rather, well, narrowly, like there wasn’t much space there and they had to be drawn in that manner, thus they’re not as voluminous as the rest of his hair, but oh well. Anyway, for all my criticism, it still is a very good drawing.
Also, I’m interested to see more of your art, so do you perhaps have a blog or something where I can see more of it? @artifedex