Those are good, though I’ll only give a, uh, slightly lengthy comment on the second one only, as it is the one that catches my interest the most. Ange looks great, everything from her clothes to her hair to Eva’s diary that she’s carrying is great. The only thing that could use more work is her eyes, well, her pupils to be more precise, they could be more accentuated, they look very tiny, thus it is a little bit difficult to understand what emotion she’s conveying. But they look good, regardless. Also, maybe the key in her hand is too large? I haven’t read Episode 8 yet though, so I’m not really familiar with its proportions. But it does look good.The goats in the background could use more detail, but they go well with with the sort of distorted colouring you’ve given to the rest of the background. Anyways, overall, I don’t think it’s an exaggeration to compare this with Umineko’s manga artists’ work.